Final Plot after TA feedback/Class feedback

After our target audience gave us feedback on our initial final plot idea, we decided to change our plot as this will ensure that we meet the needs of our target audience. We then presented this PowerPoint in class and further feedback can be seen below. The final plot PowerPoint:

Below, is the feedback that we received from the class, this will help us to see if we need to make any changes to our final idea or to see if there is anything that we can improve on. After our feedback that we got from class, Beth, our target audience and I mutually agreed that we were going to go back to the original idea of the girl getting lost on her way home because she has moved to a new town. Some other parts of our trailer that we also need to start thinking about are:

• Our lighting-if it is filmed at night; how are we going to film this?
• Who will play the roles
• Different types of camera shots
   
  We presented our original final plot to our class in one of our media lessons. They agreed that it would be better to go back to the original idea where ‘Lucy’ gets lost and ends up in the woods because she has moved to a new city rather than her being tricked to going into the woods
  Therefore, we decided that our final plot after our target audience feedback is:

• A teenage girl called Lucy moves to a new town with her family and starts a new school
• On her first day she makes new friends who tell her about the girl called Melinda who has been missing for years after entering the frightening woods.
• Lucy gets lost one day and sees Melinda who is possessed and tries to kill her.
• She manages to get away but starts seeing the girl in numerous different places
• The “missing” girl’s body was found and the demon ends up taking control of Lucy’s body (new equilibrium)