Beth and I created many different
drafts of our film trailer. Everytime we created a new draft, we would get
feedback and then go back and make these changes to ensure that we did everything
we could to meet the needs of our target audience. Our main issue at first was
allowing the audience to understand the narrative of our trailer. At first, the
narrative of the trailer wasn't clear and this didn't allow the audience to
understand the content within the film. This meant that Beth and I had to create a
new shot list and change around the audience of the film. However, this did
mean that we were adding in shots that we hadn't originally planned within our
shot list. This also raised an issue with time as we had to film some new shots
that would allow us to get our storyline across a little bit better. In the end, we came up with a few shots that
we could add into the beginning of the trailer. As a group, we decided that we
were going to add in a diary entry at the beginning of our trailer. This diary
entry would consist of Lucy writing in a diary and explaining that she has just
moved to a new town and it is her first day at school. This ensured that the
audience had a better understanding of Lucy as the new girl within the film.
In addition to this, we had also
originally planned to have a news scene at the end of the trailer. This scene
would have consisted of Melinda’s body being found as she has been missing for
so long. However, we decided not to do this as it gave too much of the
storyline away and the whole point of the trailer is to make the audience want
to see the film. If the audience already see what happens to Melinda within the
trailer, they would not need to see the full movie. We also had to design a
title and release date for the end of the trailer, which we did using
photoshop. At first, timing within our trailer became a big issue as the
trailer was 45 seconds too long. However, this soon became beneficial for us as
after target audience feedback, it allowed us to remove any shots that were no longer necessary within the trailer. Finally, we also had to re-think a few of our intertitles throughout
the development, which is evident in the different drafts of the trailers. The
development and drafts of our trailers can be seen below.
Trailer-1st Draft
Trailer-2nd Draft
Trailer-3rd Draft
Final Melinda Trailer (To Date)
Sound
Throughout the development of our
trailer, we found it extremely challenging to find conventional sound to fit in
with the shots within the trailer. As
previously mentioned throughout my research, sound is one of the most important
aspects throughout the development and Beth and I found this to be a very time
consuming and challenging task. This is one of the most important aspects of a
horror film as it is helping the film try to create a specific mood to the
scene. We recorded many different sounds; a piano, a door slamming and
footsteps however, none of them seemed to work as well as we wanted them to.
For example, the piano was just one pace and didn’t have different tones
throughout. This meant that where we wanted it to be scary and tense at the end
of the trailer, it was exactly the same as what it sounded like at the
beginning of the trailer. In the end, we finally recorded something that fitted
well with the shots within our trailer. Alix Long played a piece of music on
the piano, which we recorded. This piano is played throughout the whole of the
trailer and gradually gets faster and louder as the trailer goes on to build up
tension for the audience.
In addition to this, we also recorded a voiceover on iMovie and added different audio effects to this. For example, when Lucy says “I’ve got to find out what’s going on” we edited this to make it echo. In addition to this, diagetic sound is used within the trailer when Melinda (Beth Hayes) is in the woods and is saying the teddy bear picnic rhyme. We didn’t decide to record this as a voiceover because it would have been hard to get the sound in sync with the movement of Melinda’s lips speaking. We therefore edited the audio to make the diagetic sound louder.
In addition to this, we also recorded a voiceover on iMovie and added different audio effects to this. For example, when Lucy says “I’ve got to find out what’s going on” we edited this to make it echo. In addition to this, diagetic sound is used within the trailer when Melinda (Beth Hayes) is in the woods and is saying the teddy bear picnic rhyme. We didn’t decide to record this as a voiceover because it would have been hard to get the sound in sync with the movement of Melinda’s lips speaking. We therefore edited the audio to make the diagetic sound louder.
This piano fades in within the
second half of the Melinda trailer when Lucy walks into the woods. This is
because at this point within the trailer, the narrative should be clear the
audience and they are always waiting to see what is going to happen next. This
music was the best sound for building up tension within the trailer.
This is the first piano within the
trailer. This sound appear at the beginning of the trailer when Lucy starts her
new school and fades out when Lucy is about to walk into the woods and the
scary, loud music begins o fade in.
Piano played by Alix Long.
Feedback throughout the development
We received a lot of helpful
feedback when developing the film trailer. This helped us to go back and make
changed to trailer.











